when you face difficult problems in life, which do you feel is the best way to solve them
- asking someone with more experience for advise about the problem
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Having problems in your life can feel overwhelming and it may be that the last thing you want to do is face them. If I had to face a problem, I would have asked a wise person for some advice. It is my firm belief that mature people can help resolve a challenge for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, getting help from trained person is important for staying sane and solving problems because they are more knowledgable. Humans are social creatures and we are evolutionarily designed to help each other. If we do not seek their guidance, we will not be able to find an answer. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Last year when I gave TOEFL, I could not score above 100 which is minimum requirement to get into the dental program. When I was struggling, I decided to seek a professional tutor. As a result, after getting tips from TOEFL instructor, I finally scored above 100 and got admitted into the dental program that I could be proud of. For this reason, I was able to finish my dental school and I have been very successful at a very young age and I owe it all to my instructor who directed me in the right direction.
Secondly, one should look to others who have experienced the same kind of issue because they can have different perspective. We are surrounded by people who love us and want to help us. If you ask how they coped with, one will definitely sort out the issue. Drawing from my own experience, my uncle had a heart surgery two years ago. After that surgery, different doctors gave different opinions that he might need another surgery. However, one of my family member who is a radiologist confirmed that he would not need any further surgery. It is certainly clear to see why following suggestions from close family members can approach the challenge from a different perspective.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that it is better to ask wise people for advice. This is because they help us solve problems as they are more knowledgeable and have more experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57512953368 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67260596162 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533678756477 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1855557665 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156425567804 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486585116488 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655292484553 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11089098357 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653664603885 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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