Where would you like to read your news on internet or newspaper ? Why ?
Nowadays people are very well informed than they were before. Some people prefer to read the latest news on newspaper rather than on Internet. While others argue that Internet is one of the best options to get informed. Personally, I think that the Internet is one of the best options that our generation have chance to use it in different ways.
One of the reasons why I would prefer Internet vs Magasins is because we can inform ourselves with the latest news very quick and everywhere we are. We just need a mobile device and access to Internet and we are good to use it, without putting to much effort into it. Even though people may feel that it is better to not know everything what is happening because it might be disturbing. Still it is very important for people to know what is going on in real time around them or even internationally. If we don’t know what is happening we might miss a lot of important news that we should know.
Basically, it is very important to be informed and smart devices makes it easy for us to do that.
The second reason is that when we use internet we have also the chance to watch the video attached to the news. We can watch live news, not just reading them. With the development of the technology our lifestyle is changed in all aspects. Also, people that have disabilities like, problems with the vision they could get informed just by listening the news. This service is very valuable for them and all other people in general. Even though some people prefer to read newspapers instead, the recent studies have shown that the number of people that are using Internet to inform themselves is dramatically increased.
That’s why, using Internet we have the opportunity to read and listen the news.
Summing up, I believe that Internet is one of the resources that is very convenient and more sophisticated than other resources.
Where would you like to read your news on internet or newspaper ? Why ?
Nowadays people are very well informed than they were before. Some people prefer to read the latest news on newspaper rather than on Internet. While others argue that Internet is one of the best options to get informed. Personally, I think that the Internet is one of the best options that our generation have chance to use it in different ways.
One of the reasons why I would prefer Internet vs Magasins is because we can inform ourselves with the latest news very quick and everywhere we are. We just need a mobile device and access to Internet and we are good to use it, without putting to much effort into it. Even though people may feel that it is better to not know everything what is happening because it might be disturbing. Still it is very important for people to know what is going on in real time around them or even internationally. If we don’t know what is happening we might miss a lot of important news that we should know.
Basically, it is very important to be informed and smart devices makes it easy for us to do that.
The second reason is that when we use internet we have also the chance to watch the video attached to the news. We can watch live news, not just reading them. With the development of the technology our lifestyle is changed in all aspects. Also, people that have disabilities like, problems with the vision they could get informed just by listening the news. This service is very valuable for them and all other people in general. Even though some people prefer to read newspapers instead, the recent studies have shown that the number of people that are using Internet to inform themselves is dramatically increased.
That’s why, using Internet we have the opportunity to read and listen the news.
Summing up, I believe that Internet is one of the resources that is very convenient and more sophisticated than other resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s on newspaper rather than on Internet. While others argue that Internet is one of th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the Internet is one of the best options that our generation have chance to use ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e best options that our generation have chance to use it in different ways. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... we are good to use it, without putting to much effort into it. Even though people...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ppening because it might be disturbing. Still it is very important for people to know...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d in all aspects. Also, people that have disabilities like, problems with the vis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, still, well, while, i think, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69855072464 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.544529877 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489855072464 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3724836309 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3157894737 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47368421053 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518473270361 0.236089414692 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178411829244 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170391114331 0.0737576698707 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288125998438 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.196312096915 0.0645574589148 304% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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