Which is better? To be the leader of a group or to be a member of group in which another person is the leader.
Some people might argue a leader of a group bring huge merits from clout, proud or more authority to influence the member of our team. Nevertheless, in the different point of view, leader need to take the discomfortability or distress for their location. Furthermore, a follower learn and get the information more efficiently because professional colleagues, another person account for the leader will give the guideline to grow each individuals in their group.
To begin with, a leader endure to burden copious of stress and problems the member of group do not have to consider. For example, while a group member concentrate on only given matters from an elder, the group leader additionally focus on a schedules of tasks from all members to maximize their ability. In addition, the leader should take part every meetings as a representative of a group in the situation of a separation of sources or budgets with surrounding team or discussion of the plans for the larger group go.
On top of that, as a part of the group system, the group member progress increment the number of proficient area faster. the keys to become the leader. With a high chances, the rest of the member with the leader will be the master in the fields of I'm embodied. Thus, struggling in the group fill the gap of developement with them. On the other hand, the lesser opportunity to be fail is allowed to the leader because the range of leverage various to all member in the group in spite the mistake of member affects little region of workplace.
Lastly, delegating the leader use the power to impress a great pressure on the responsibility of their group. A member of group solely focus all energy to process given question, so they carry the ball as amount of it. Although they had supposed to be burden, in overall weight of it will not be regarded as the same. Even one error caused from the freshman lead to fire the leader with respect to the rules of my community. that is why approval system are operating on the major companies
To sum up, being a leader admittedly enables to realize benefits such as a flexible between the work and life ratio, it still leave disadvantages from administering each member of group. In this regard, what I think is the follower who involved in the group can learn more effectively and own more gains for their place in the society and the fellowship is much more important than the leadership to support or develope their group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2063.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 428.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82009345794 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72631015365 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528037383178 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4857077084 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.352941176 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1764705882 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7647058824 5.45110844103 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432531960462 0.236089414692 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147406979105 0.076458572812 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495433683089 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256376782737 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537826907204 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.