Which is better? To be the leader of a group or to be a member of group in which another person is the leader.
While a leader should have a lot of skills such as, managing time efficiently and dealing with different problems, I still prefer to be a leader of a group. Because I think I have the potential for solving problems and planning and do the timetabling which makes me qualified for that.
First, I am a kind of problem solver and I always try to interpret the obstacles which are in my way of goals. After that, I analyze the problem and find a solution for that. For example, I remember when I was a child my computer was infected by a virus and I didn’t know how to repair it or how to reinstall the operation system. So I decided to surf the net for and after a couple of hours studying different tutorials I finally learned how to repair my computer.
Second, one of my favorite majors is constructional management which I want to pursue this major as a graduate student. I remember I had a course which was related to this major in university. And I learned different materials about planning and timetabling for a construction project. And I was really eager to learn more and I studied and solved the questions that my professor gave to me. This was another reason that I think I could be a good project manager.
Finally, most of the time I liked to work in teams and I have tried to direct my teammates as a leader. And also I motivate them with different ideas to work on. And I know a leader should always defend his or her teammates against others and give them the opportunity to show their abilities and also the leader must solve his or her colleague's problem in order to work better.
I conclusion, in my point of view I can be a good leader for my coworkers and teammate in future. And I can achieve my goals by working with others as a manager.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...od leader for my coworkers and teammate in future. And I can achieve my goals by working ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'i think', 'kind of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198879551821 0.229887763892 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0448179271709 0.0866891130778 52% => OK
Adverbs: 0.03081232493 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.126050420168 0.0685040099705 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106442577031 0.118717715034 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0252100840336 0.0351676179071 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68701261065 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0420168067227 0.0309702414327 136% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0952380952381 0.0887237588012 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0168067226891 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0252100840336 0.0139019557991 181% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1776.0 2387.08602151 74% => OK
No of words: 329.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39817629179 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310030395137 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.224924012158 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155015197568 0.174417080927 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0942249240122 0.112833075102 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68701261065 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501519756839 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.523154169 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5625 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3154310609 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.5533526081 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.644075263715 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.0549012158 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 0.991596638655 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364391283712 0.300154397459 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110731510051 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686774367824 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568799595037 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140600782762 0.151897553556 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134293860191 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834760542119 0.0781384742642 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.278929280249 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0557978967821 0.067059652881 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219444506545 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556150080372 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.