Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Youth is wasted on the young.
I totally disagree with this statement, although adults have more experience than young people, it doesn’t mean that all young people waste their time because they don’t know as much as experienced people. So youth is not wasted on the young.
Frist of all, young people needs to find the right path. We have a lot of successful people that they earned their reputation at their young ages, like Mark Zuckerberg that when he create the Facebook website when he was a student at Harvard University and he made a big fortune for himself. Also, he has done a lot of charity for helping people around the world.
Second, young people have a passion for different things, so this is a good weapon for them for achieving their dreams. They can use this passion to become successful in their favorite major. For example Kobe Bryant who is a very famous basketball player in NBA, he has practiced a lot to gain his position in basketball as a professional player.
Last but not least, life is a game of inches. I as the young person found that I need to experience everything in the path of I have chosen. So I may fail a lot instead I will learn plentiful things. I remember I started a business with one of my friends and it didn’t work out and I’m not sad because I know that at least I tried something in my life so I am going to try again in order to succeed.
In conclusion, young people don’t waste their time, they just looking for their path and as soon as they found it they will put everything they have into it. So we can say that youth is wasted on young.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
...ages, like Mark Zuckerberg that when he create the Facebook website when he was a stud...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'at least', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.19881305638 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.166172106825 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.080118694362 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0474777448071 0.046263068375 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.124629080119 0.0685040099705 182% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.13649851632 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.026706231454 0.0351676179071 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50001876518 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0178041543027 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0712166172107 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0148367952522 0.0209618222197 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00890207715134 0.0139019557991 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1595.0 2387.08602151 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 408.028673835 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46232876712 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.280821917808 0.338922669872 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202054794521 0.251872472559 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116438356164 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0821917808219 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50001876518 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541095890411 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 55.2608038911 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8571428571 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3867909299 48.84282405 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.5533526081 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.644075263715 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 41.0626223092 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.0701754386 1.45489161554 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18761707629 0.300154397459 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0822691403897 0.103427244359 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0593633990939 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540636810036 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202893452183 0.151897553556 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097445371064 0.114077575197 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117282619773 0.0781384742642 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.175405081158 0.336927656856 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0201354805072 0.067059652881 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121352487209 0.210909579961 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730012316707 0.0618886996521 118% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.