Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
All high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language.
Although some students may find it boring to study another language, I think it is very useful for them to know a foreign language especially, when communication matters. And they will understand the importance of being able to speak in another language in a couple years after their graduation.
First, these days a lot of jobs are required you to be able to know English as an international language in order to communicate with other people worldwide. For instance, in hotels an employee who works as a reception needs to speak English for booking. Also, trading companies which their businesses are about exporting and importing various products from all of the world need employees with advanced skills in different languages such as DHL Express which is doing shipping and mailing services.
Another benefit of knowing foreign language is when students want to immigrate to abroad for continuing their education. And the admission of International universities asks students to show a proof English proficiency. And if don’t have that they must enroll in an English course for a couple of months then they can start their education at the university. And also if they want to get financial support for paying the expenses, again one of the important factors of winning an award is knowing English well and speaking it fluently.
Consequently In my idea learning and studying another language is very helpful for the future of the students. And they should start learning a foreign language at early ages in elementary school because it is a lot easier and enjoyable for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ing and importing various products from all of the world need employees with advanced skil...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tart their education at the university. And also if they want to get financial supp...
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Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
...e important factors of winning an award is knowing English well and speaking it fluently. ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e important factors of winning an award is knowing English well and speaking it fluently. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...glish well and speaking it fluently. Consequently In my idea learning and studying anothe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for instance', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226148409894 0.229887763892 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.173144876325 0.158761421928 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0812720848057 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388692579505 0.046263068375 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0636042402827 0.0685040099705 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141342756184 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0636042402827 0.0351676179071 181% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.81723863346 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0388692579505 0.0309702414327 126% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.095406360424 0.0887237588012 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.017667844523 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017667844523 0.0139019557991 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1594.0 2387.08602151 67% => OK
No of words: 262.0 408.028673835 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08396946565 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37786259542 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312977099237 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221374045802 0.174417080927 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141221374046 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81723863346 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.524397521467 112% => OK
Word variations: 61.0913994218 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6684587814 53% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8181818182 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9696521427 48.84282405 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.909090909 120.699889404 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 55.1158917418 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.5641025641 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245201996518 0.300154397459 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126095631116 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0525369172487 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612273172385 0.497263757937 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964897127254 0.151897553556 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113171471655 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486562124778 0.0781384742642 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293143114155 0.336927656856 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0405391171206 0.067059652881 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162483759159 0.210909579961 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00542244861651 0.0618886996521 9% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.