Which of the following do you think contribute most to an enjoyable vacation:
1. good food 2. good location 3. good friends to travel with. Select one and give
your reasons.
Throughout history, human being's lives have changed enormously since they inherently have a tendency to improve their lives. Vacation would be an essential factor having remarkable effects on people's lives. Although some people believe that good food are location are more crucial, others are convinced that travel with good friend is more important than other options. In no way could I agree with the former point. There are some reasons, the most important of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, it is undoubted that so influential has releasing stress been that it has had a great number of positive effects on people's lives from around the world, yet above all, it has helped people to release their stresses and tensions effectively by spending their time with their friends. In fact, friends are familiar with each other, and they can recover themselves easily. To illustrate this fact, one needs only refer to numerous people preferring travel with their friends because they are able to be ready toward probable problems. An example will illustrate this fact much better. There was a time that my friends and I travel china, and then, one of my friends had gone to china two years ago. For this reason, he became familiar with a lot parts of china, and finally, we spend our time effectively and made memorable journey. Not until this incident occurred did I realize the importance of traveling with my friends, for I do believe that had I thought about the food or gone alone, I would have faced a lot of problems.
The second debatable point is that on the one hand, some people believe that they have more freedom if they travel alone to great places or they are able to choose better food, yet on the other hand, some people are convinced that if they travel with their friends they are able to save a great deal of money because their costs will decrease. In fact, I strongly agree with the latter point , for I do believe that the more people travel with their friends, the more they can save money and experience enjoyable vacation by visiting more places. By way of illustration, the noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that the 90 percentage of hotels or restaurant give a lot of discount to people if they travel with their friends.
To make a long story short, no one can deny the enormous positive effects of traveling with friends on people's lives. Not only are they able to release their stresses easily, but also they can solve the probable problems by consulting each other. For this reason, I highly recommend that people travel with their friends because it brings them several lucrative consequences like what mentioned above and many others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...great places or they are able to choose better food, yet on the other hand, some peopl...
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Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., I strongly agree with the latter point , for I do believe that the more people ...
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Line 3, column 399, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngly agree with the latter point , for I do believe that the more people travel w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, second, so, then, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8547008547 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41398319012 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474358974359 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.3339802657 48.9658058833 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192384055162 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684894908694 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567227013518 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128280414913 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439130498065 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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