Which kind of following job would you choose?
1, a company offering you a job with challenging and interesting project but less vacation days.
2, a company offering you a job that is not so challenging and interesting but more vacation days.
In modern society, there are various kinds of jobs in each company. While some companies provide employees with a demanding and intriguing project but fewer vacation days, others produce a job that is not challenging and interesting but more vacation days. It is so controversial for people to decide a specific answer about the two choices. In my view, people should acquire a job related to an unexciting project and plenty of day-offs. They can ease their mental by bountiful vacation days to forget memories about tremendous work, spend free time on their hobbies, and hand out with their friends.
To begin with, people can stop thinking about their work at home by the company they are not interested in. Most employees working at a company feel exhausted by enormous tasks. For example, the due date to submit important transcriptions makes them in trouble through high pressure. Therefore, they have to consider the paper works even in their home. However, they could ease the problem through less attractive businesses and more vacation days because they do not need to care about it in joyful vacation time.
Secondly, people dedicate enough time to their interests by ample vacation days. People have to been working at an office until late at night. Thus, there are tons of limited times for some people to spend their time on hobbies. They cannot enjoy their intrigues as much as they can. For example, one of my friends would like to go to build him muscle at a gym. The reason is that he has to work until 8 pm. He resigned his membership in the gym. On the other hand, if the companies offer them sufficient free time, they could not only consume their time on anything they want but also relieve their feeling.
Finally, companies that propel workers into getting more vacation days gives more opportunities to hang out with their friends. One of the best ways to comfort people to meet with friends. People can discuss any topics with each other such as works, family, enjoyments, and so on. As a result, they could fresh the brain and gain new ideas from others. Moreover, it is easy for them to talk about their concerns instead of their colleagues. They are capable of boosting the quality of tasks they have to deal with in their company.
To sum up, people should work at the company which procures an uninterested job and many day-off. I surely believe that they can relax to be unable to remember their works at home, getting into their curiosities, and going out with their friends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bies, and hand out with their friends. To begin with, people can stop thinking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 52.1666666667 153% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78899082569 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41423896609 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534403669725 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9716366289 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3076923077 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202116601163 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594570500588 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740611727117 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135749306332 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829249402438 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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