which life is comfortable our generation or our elders. do you agree or disagree
The world has changed drastically from the period when our parents were young. I strongly believe that my life was full of comfort when I was young as compared to parents. According to the facts which I am going to cover in the below passages.
To begin with, in my days we have more leisure time to spend and the interference of technology in our life makes it more comfortable. Nowadays people have to do their jobs only for a short period of time. They can spend more time in vacations, salary is quite good, and jobs comes with extra benefits like house, funds, vehicles, and many more which was not present during our parents time. For example when my father works in the mill factory as a senior supervisor he only get paid three thousand rupees in total. He have to do part time job to meet the expenses of house and our studies. There was
Second, transportation facility was not there people have to walk or use their bicycle if they have. Communication facility was not very effective and cheap they have to send letters to the person to whom they want to communicate. Which takes and lot of time and doesn’t offer a guarantee. In early days women are not allowed to study, work, and take their decision of their own. They were not allowed to get out of home and walk shoulder to shoulder with men. They were pressurised to give up their professional aspirations.
In conclusion availability of resources, technology and communication makes our era more comfortable and easier to live as compared to the elders because we have more and more opportunity now as compared to our elders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... have to do their jobs only for a short period of time. They can spend more time in vacations,...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
... factory as a senior supervisor he only get paid three thousand rupees in total. He...
^^^
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...paid three thousand rupees in total. He have to do part time job to meet the expense...
^^^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...thousand rupees in total. He have to do part time job to meet the expenses of house and o...
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Line 3, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nses of house and our studies. There was Second, transportation facility was not ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66197183099 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63035475133 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545774647887 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4009008918 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172471082746 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562822420025 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560840620983 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115642727326 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606833157975 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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