which is the most import quality for school projects- creative - cooperative- organized
Hectic school life immerses students in many tasks in different realms. Some Individuals believe that educated people should be creative and cooperative in order to succeed. From my vantage points, I believe that young people should be organized than other alternatives for the following reasons.
To begin with, organize individuals could achieve their cools easily. They could finish many things in one day. For instance, today, most of the students have many missions to perform each day because most of them are living independently. They implement many tasks like studying, chorse, follow news by watching TV, and etc. If studying individuals could not manage their time wisely, they could not survive and success in their life. On the other hand, the creative youngsters could not perform all his duties, If they un organize. Moreover, they will be immersed on life's commitment.
Secondly, messy students could not execute their duties perfectly. They might encounter many troubles in their life. For instance, I have had a buddy, since I was high school, He was very smart and intelligent But he was chaotic. When we were studying the chemistry lab, He was always harsh and utilized a different material. Many times, he was failed on performing the experiment due to using a wrong material or different magerment. Also, sometimes he did not come to the lab or came late. Even though he was smart, but he could not succeed because he was messy. The students should be organized in order to achieve their grades.
To wrap it up, contemplating all aforesaid reasons, Organized students is more beneficial than other alternatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22097378277 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67170651132 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.968124505 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3684210526 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0526315789 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113279094456 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346411130328 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408986324989 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758329615908 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415984826377 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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