Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily Use specific reasons and ex | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and ex

our relations with other people have a positive impact on our lives especially, a person who is sharing most time with us. From my vantage point, I believe that having a few friends for a long time has a tremendous impact on our life for the following reasons.

To begin with, we could sharing important moments with our old friends because they knew everything about us. For instance, Most of my old friends have a lot of information about my life. They know what I like, what cause me happy and what I dislike. when I went to my college friend last week, he cooked my favorite food for me. In addition, He prepared my best dessert because he knew that the way for making me happy is the delicious food. we had enjoyed time together. on the other hand, When my new coworker invited me to his house, he was made seafood for me. I could not eat anything because i had an allergy to this type of food. While my old friends do not try to cook this food when I visit them. Consequently, old friends have a good idea about what could have a positive impact on us.

finally, long time friends could help us in hard situations. For instance, Before many months, I made a car's accident because I had an appointment for a work interview and I woke up too late at that time. My car damaged and my hand hurted . The first person came to my mind at that time my friend , Ali, who school 's friend, came to an accident location and toke me to the hospital and stayed with me till I had wellness. Also, he borrowed me money in order to fix my car. In oppose to my new friend, Ahmad, he just came to visit me and he never asked me about my concern and need. Thus, I did not ask him to help me because I do have a strong relationship with him. Therefore, long period fiends could assist us in difficult moments.

to wrap it up, few friends for many years could make us happy and help us in hard situations

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ould assist us in difficult moments. to wrap it up, few friends for many years ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22865013774 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32603223776 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498622589532 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8855575773 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0952380952 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164922135287 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585427065825 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398634055687 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124153032594 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021800144768 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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