which one better to work close to your home or too living far away from your work with a high salary.? which one you would like and why?
Hectic live has a tremendous impact on people's life. Some individuals like to work in any place to collect money. From my vantage point, I believe that the salary is not important to me. I would like to live near my job for the following reasons.
To begin with, Living near job location help workers to save their effort. living in a near distance could reduce people's tension. For example, I am working in a dental clinic as a dental hygenist. My work location is about 5 miles away from my resident. I need just 10 minutes to land my work destination. I wake up early and prepar my breakfast with my family everyday. Also, I am performing some physical activities because a have a lot of spare time. On the other hand, My co-worker lives on a far area. He drives for More than hours to reach job location. He can not perform any things before he comes to his work building. In addition, he reachs to the work tired and in stress from the road's traffic. Before a few days, he came with a headache from the street's crowding. Now, he thinks in leave his job in order to have less life's tension.
Secondly, living in a far destination is more expensive for laborers. Employees' commitments will increase. For instance, if workers live in a long-distance location, they will pay more money for many expenses. They should pay for a car's fuel, car's maintenance, and Toll, which is a fast road without crowding, Also, they will pay for food beacuse they do not have time to cook or to come back for their home to have their lunch break. All these commitments will need more money from workers. As a result, if the employes pay a good salary for their workers, laborers will pay it for their life's commitments. On the other hand, a low salary price with a near job location could help workers to save money because they do not have a lot of responsibilities.
To wrap it, contemplating for all aforesaid reasons, Working in a near distention have more benefits for laborers than other alternatives
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...tion help workers to save their effort. living in a near distance could reduce peoples...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... and prepar my breakfast with my family everyday. Also, I am performing some physical ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57777777778 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63197339474 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513888888889 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4918928389 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.92 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.68 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154113285231 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498247232427 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340167760965 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10018687083 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491437774634 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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