which one do you prefer
1. a challenging, interesting job with a few vacation days
2. a less challenging job with more vacation days
In today's hectic life, job satisfaction and its contribution to human's prosperity have been indeed a major concern for so long. Depending on personal experience, personality type, and emotional concern, people differ significantly in their attitudes towards this issue. Although many hold the idea that a challenging job with less vacation days sounds more intriguing than a simpler job with more days to rest, others counter this specific perspective. Personally speaking, I would prefer a job with less challenges and more off days for relaxation because not only does this kind of job have less tension and stress, but also there are more time available to have quality time with family and friends.
First and foremost, a simple job offering more rest days is more interesting, for it can give less negative energy and pressure while working. As a matter of fact, when an employee has several responsibilities and should accomplish different projects in the minimum time possible, gradually he feels more anxious and exhausted in comparison to those who have to put much less efforts to complete their tasks. One of the startling facts which astonished me is that people erroneously think challenging occupations brings passion and energy to the job due to many new situation employees may face in these types of vocations. To some extent, their notion does not hold water, seeing as it is based on misconceptions, and they are oblivious to the fact that everybody has a capacity to endure difficulties. Consequently, when an staff is always dealing with complicated area, after a while, he may feel much more stress than he could bear leading to some mental diseases. This whole situation becomes even worse when it comes to less days available to take a break and recover from pressures one have faced at his work place. That is why I firmly believe having a less complex job with more days for rest is more lucrative for staffs.
A further more subtle point is that owing to more time being available, employees can grasp this opportunity to have fun with the important people of their lives. In fact, an individual can plan to go on a trip with his wife, meet up with their close friends on weekend, or even spend hours playing with his children on weekend. It is axiomatic that by spending more time resting near families and friends, one can cement their relationships with them and experience more unforgettable moments near them. That is why I strongly believe a job with less difficulties and more off days is more fascinating and beneficial for employees.
To warp up, considering all the pinpoints mentioned above, we may conclude that an occupation with less challenges and more days available to rest is more attractive than a complex job with less rest days. For the sake of brevity, a few points are worth reiterating: Firstly, an individual can experience less pressure with this kind of job. Secondly, individuals have more time to spend with their immediate family and friends. All in all, it is high time authorities put more emphasis on convicting a congenial situation in which job satisfaction could increase in the best way possible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
...es towards this issue. Although we find many hold the idea that for relaxation, it is mor...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...best way is to avoid people and spend a little bit of time alone. To some extent, this not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, at least, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2553.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97660818713 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82459167226 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522417153996 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.1897112184 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.65 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.65 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0358188267487 0.236089414692 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.012688961114 0.076458572812 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0164759481083 0.0737576698707 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228066060113 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00976398463295 0.0645574589148 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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