Which one do you think is preferable: shopping at a big store or several small stores?
In today's modern world, with highly growing size of population from one hand and changing of life way from another side, the people's way to supply their demands has been modified, as well. One these changes has been occurred in shopping quality. In several years ago, small stores respond to all needs of clients properly and people without any dissatisfaction bought their products. Nowadays, as far as I am concerned, the huge shopping centers and malls are better replacement to the new demands of humans in different areas in the world, among which availability of products, being time efficient, and having economical qualities are important advantages of malls and big centers.
For first reason, the big shopping centers fulfill the all requirements of clients due presence and availability of great deal of productions. In today's malls, people can supply their demands based on their tastes. The diversity as well as being various goods from different brands with versatile designs, colors, and qualities attract many stratum of a society and respond to their buyers' request. of goods in the big stores. Alongside this diversity, huge centers provide products with high reliability and make a sense of encouragement in people to purchase their life's necessities, while the small stores are active in predefined business and afford a small section of people's needs. On the other hand, big stores are commonly available in all times of a day, so clients can provide their requires even in the night.
From other point of view, the malls can save a significant deal of time for their clients. Nowadays, time play a crucial role in everyone's life and people plan their lifetimes in order to respond to their own responsibilities in particular and the family members' expectations in general. In addition, with increasingly growth of population and the high use of personal automobiles in the big cities, people have not any time to spend their times in different small stores. For example, a person in order to provide versatile shopping list has to go to various stores, while same person can purchase his or her shopping contents with spending minimum energy and time. Therefore, the malls are more time efficient in compared to small stores in buying varied goods.
Last but not least, the economic situations of supplied products of huge stores is another important factor. Advent of economic downturn in many different areas of the world, families pursue the ways that bring minimum amount of costs. With this in mind that people using economical conditions, big centers can be a proper response for their demand. One of the important differences of malls in comparison to small stores is that shopping centers consider financial incentives to their clients. For instance, they offer discounts or gift cards per purchased amount of products. On the other hand, because they plan to keep their customers more satisfied, they tend to keep a close eye on the quality of their goods and guarantee their products. While, in small stores shopkeepers cannot offer proper discounts to their clients.
Totally, shopping from huge centers can be a proper response to the people and fulfill their needs considering various types products from different brands and designs. As well as, being time and cost efficient are another factors of malls which prevents the losses of time and money in great deal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stratum seems to be countable; consider using: 'many strata', 'many stratums'.
Suggestion: many strata; many stratums
... designs, colors, and qualities attract many stratum of a society and respond to their buyer...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Of
...respond to their buyers' request. of goods in the big stores. Alongside this...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... factor. Advent of economic downturn in many different areas of the world, families pursue the...
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Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eir goods and guarantee their products. While, in small stores shopkeepers cannot off...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in general', 'in particular', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.305426356589 0.229887763892 133% => OK
Verbs: 0.100775193798 0.158761421928 63% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111627906977 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0325581395349 0.046263068375 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0372093023256 0.0685040099705 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141085271318 0.118717715034 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0279069767442 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79436511883 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0279069767442 0.0309702414327 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0697674418605 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108527131783 0.0209618222197 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0046511627907 0.0139019557991 33% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3459.0 2387.08602151 145% => OK
No of words: 557.0 408.028673835 137% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21005385996 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391382405745 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29802513465 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210053859964 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132854578097 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79436511883 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450628366248 0.524397521467 86% => OK
Word variations: 53.2482969655 59.2087087015 90% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2083333333 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3955286716 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.125 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2083333333 20.5533526081 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 53.0108467983 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 2.78181818182 1.45489161554 191% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0940920000282 0.300154397459 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107554793688 0.103427244359 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608670728148 0.0752933317313 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518477276521 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132971115448 0.151897553556 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486802574815 0.114077575197 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404687105839 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.480333590485 0.336927656856 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.117930459911 0.067059652881 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069347746515 0.210909579961 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207130285099 0.0618886996521 33% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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Rates: 73.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30