Which one of the following is the best approach to reduce living expense?
A. share the rent with roommate
B. do not buy the latest technology products like cellphone frequently
C. cook food at home.
As a famous saying goes, saving is earning. It does not matter how much one earns; The way one spends it is more important. I prefer not to buy technology gadgets as soon as they are released to lower my money expenditure. I will elaborate on the reasons for holding this opinion in the following essay.
First of all, I do not feel the urge to change my technology products such as mobile phone or laptop as often as their new versions is realsed. Although newer products enjoy better performance, I do not believe the older version is totally useless. Tech companies invest a huge portion their income on research and development. They hire scientist to invent new materials and improve the quality of thier products. In my opinion the technological advancements outrun the need of customers; That is, we have many instances that users can not utilise their device to its full capacity. As one example, the power of smartphone processors is constantly increasing, but a person who use such cell phone for everyday purposes such as messaging and online shoping does not need so much of processing power. Of course a teenager may love a powerfull phone to play online games with high quality of visual effect; A busy hardworking adult does not have enough time to play games; Thus, I only change my electronic devices when they are complete out of kilter. By so doing, I can lower my expenses and save money.
Secondly, products with latest features are expensive when they are first introduced. When a new feature is embeded for the first time in a device, the manufaturing company charges more for that feature. It is only after the feature is included by other companies in a similar product that the price become reasonable. I remember when a leading laptop computer brand introduces laptops with webcames, they priced that model towice as the price the same laptop without camera. At first it was very tempting for me to acquire such useful laptop since I could make my online meetings without having to attache a seperate camera to my personal computer, but I could not afford it; However, a couple of months later, other laptop manufacturers started to include a webcam in all of their products, and the price gap between laptops with camrea and without it started to close. So, I do not buy now products as soon as they are released, and I wait until its hot market cools off and their price stabilises.
All in all, a great way to save money is to fight the temptation of buy cool new products at the beginning of its introduction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
... and save money. Secondly, products with latest features are expensive when they are fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, of course, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73033707865 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62864298046 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9890227926 48.9658058833 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.789473684 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4210526316 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123720420833 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418489117414 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377680552025 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808788020206 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00730776040728 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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