Which one of the following is the best approach to reduce living expenses?
A. share the rent with a roommate
B. do not buy the latest technology products like cellphone frequently
C. cook food at home.
As a famous saying goes, saving is earning. It does not matter how much one earns; The way one spends it is important. I prefer not to buy technology gadgets as soon as they are released to lower my money expenditure. I will elaborate on the reasons for holding this opinion in the following essay.
First, I do not feel the urge to change my technology products such as mobile phones or laptops as often as their new versions are released. Although newer products enjoy better performance than older ones, I do not believe the older version is useless. Tech companies invest a huge portion of their income in research and development. They hire scientists to invent new materials and improve the quality of their products. In my opinion, the technological advancements outrun the need of customers; we have many instances that users can not utilize their device to its full capacity. As one example, the power of smartphone processors is constantly increasing, but a person who uses such cell phones for everyday purposes such as messaging and online shopping does not need so much processing power. Of course, a teenager may love a powerful phone to play online games with high visual effects, but a hardworking adult does not have enough time to play games; Thus, I only change my electronic devices when they are completely out of kilter. By so doing, I can lower my expenses and save money.
Secondly, products with the latest features are expensive when they are first introduced. When a new feature is embedded for the first time in a device, the manufacturing company charges more for that feature. Only after other companies include the feature in a similar product, the price become reasonable. When a leading laptop computer brand introduced laptops with webcams, they priced that model twice the price of the same laptop without a camera. At first, it was very tempting for me to acquire such a useful laptop since I could make my online meetings without attaching a separate camera to my personal computer, but I could not afford it. However, a couple of months later, other laptop manufacturers started to include a webcam in all of their products, and the price gap between laptops with a camera and without it started to close. So, I do not buy new products as soon as they are released, and I wait until its hot market cools off and their price stabilizes.
All in all, a great way to save money is to fight the temptation of buying cool new products at the beginning of their introduction.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2084.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7908045977 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66335505828 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544827586207 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1383806678 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122048117877 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403045884302 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372472102146 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805957149167 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00826849552899 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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