“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
All people, since dawn of humanity until nowadays, find the meaning of life in achievements and fulfilling their goals and ambition. In this regard, man always scrutinize the reasons why a person succeed or fail. There are a common belief that in addition to hard work, for one to succeed, luck plays a vital role. On the other hand, some people assert that success has a very weak correlation to luck. Although the first group’s arguments may cast show of doubt on subscribing to the latter idea, there are several reasons that lead me to support that success is the only child of hard working. Th...
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man always scrutinize the reasons why a person succeed or fail.
man always scrutinizes the reasons why a person succeeds or fails.
a person thrive without any knowledge
a person thrives without any knowledge
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