When people succeed it is because of hard work Luck has nothing to do with success Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position

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“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

eSuccess is all about hard work to succeed in life all have to work harder. Luck is something that people gets by doing nothing like individuals who born in rich family are lucky they do not even have to do work. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that success is all about how lucky are you, wheras, other have different perspective. I personally, though, believe that people who put all their efforts to get their life goals are the successful person. In the following essay, I intend to put forth my points and reasons of support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, people achieve their destination by working all day and night. It is necessary to do because we do not have anything in life until we work for it. To exemplify, one of my friend she belongs to a really poor family but she always wanted to go abroad for her further education and she worked hard for 2 years. She saved money for her expensive university fees. In addition, she got admission on scholarship in one of the most high ranked top university of the world. Now, she is working in a huge firm as an assistance manager. Thus, this example elucidates that hard work always pays off and make you successful.
Secondly, successful people keep working because they want to be the best. They do not wait for miracles and never waste there time to get lucky. It is essential to keep working and be in progress because nowadays competition is getting tougher in all over the world if, you stop you loose. For instance, one of my friend do not want to work and always said that working hard is useless and everything is you luck. Moreover, after 10 years in school reunion when we met, she was so upset that she did not work hard and her all classmates are successful in life except her. Therefore, this instance illustrates that luck has nothing to do with your life success.
To wrap up, I believe that even God likes the hard work of people and there should be no embracement in working. Success only comes to those who work hard.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: ESuccess
eSuccess is all about hard work to succeed in li...
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Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...exquisite point to be mentioned is that, people achieve their destination by work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52445652174 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41260124963 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9280120255 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307379275215 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984280846062 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747917664354 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191797402537 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706482348671 0.0645574589148 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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