Which one of the following do you think is the best way to get to know a city in a limited amount of time when you first visit it? 1.touring historic sites; 2. going to markets or shops; 3. eating in restaurants or spending time in cafes.
People have different goals while travelling to a city overseas. Some of them like to spend time visiting well-known sites and attractions, other prefer to investigate country's cuisine. Apparently for me, the best way to familiarize yourself with a new place is going to local markets or auntique shops. Only looking for famous places will not be enough to understand the culture of the country and the character and way of living of people, who live in the city.
First and foremost, in famous cities the great amount of money and attention have been put into historical centers. Undeniably, the outstanding architecture and colorit of old narrow streets should not be missed while visiting a new place. However, if you time is limited, the best choice is to explore the suburbs of the city. All nations are consisted of different types of people, and having an opportunity to understant other cultures and traditions by witnessing it yourself is the most fascinating part of travels for me. The one important reason for me is my concern, that people are the face of the country they are leaving in. Their chores, unique way of conducting regular things can tell a lot about country and particularly the city.
Secondly, another reason for shopping in local shops or markets - is the economical situation in the country. News channels or articles on the internet can't tell you the entire truth about the welth rate of the country. When you go to a regular convenience store, you can watch which products people buy the most; the prices, which can be compared to the salaries; the variety of market wares and other points which are able to tell a lot. I consider that the country can't be understood without paying your attention to its economy. After getting acknowledged with the situation on the market, you start to understand residents, the problems they tend to face and their way of living. Moreover, when visiting such places, you can come across unique objects, which can be collected by you, keeping the memories you obtained from your travel.
Overall, in my opinion, the best way to feel the city and to understand its residents is to stay away from the historical center. They are usually specifically made up for tourists, so you won't find out almost any information about the true life of the city.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tell a lot. I consider that the country cant be understood without paying your atten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87594936709 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63091565272 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554430379747 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.900767833 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274573705429 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759091536727 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574466286061 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14847818133 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477719458188 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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