Which option would you prefer when you have free time off school?
1: taking part in part - time job or volunteering work 2: playing a musical instrument
Free time in the university class seems like a gala day. More often than not, when I get free time in between two classes, I use it according to my choice as it creates an extra sap of our life. Since my predilection induces to turn my mind here and there for voluntary works, I grasp that opportunity whatever free time I get. In the progressive manner, I wholeheartedly depict my logic why I do believe my fashion of choice is concurrent.
To embark on, every human being feels the innerness of any motive of any work with which he takes decision of how and why he pass that time. For this reason, psychology nods us to use my time as my wish that again and again responds to predilection of mind. No doubt intention and propensity is the mainstay to unearth any new happenstance in life. In the similar way, my philosophy tends me to use my fuel of physiology road to the voluntary work. From the very advent of my life, it enamors me like a gum, which is why when I get enough time I properly exercise it. From my personal experience, when I was in school level, in the break period I went to the Blood Donation Club from where I learned how to help harried people by dint of bestowing blood. Therefore, that exhortation boosts me to work in the voluntary work seriously. Recently we together with few members of Winter Cloth Distribution Club made workshop in the free time of 1.30 hours in the seminar room of our campus where lot of students bore a testimony that I am the most interactive and diversified person in this campus. Here it is referable that I believe this voluntary work not only for pleasure but also it unnerves me as a predominant duty in the society.
Furthermore, everyone of educational background will feel voluntary work as a kilter with which we can heighten the leadership quality quite comfortably which is very functional in the future. Actually, in this world if you have capacity to entail the audience by your charismatic speech and technical management, you are the hero of that community. That’s why it is now the burning question in the education town. In consideration to it, I planned to be adjoined myself in the career club and others science club so that it can help me to build up inner leadership underpins my going to USA. For instance, in the graduate and post-graduate scholarship system, fund is invariably based on the leadership quality of a student. Otherwise, they will not provide fund to the applicant. Moreover, when I was in second year, I delivered speech in different places especially in the governmental project that’s was possible for my association in the club work. For sure I can write a statement those works assists me to be a confident and makes me a leader.
Last but not least, if I use my free time in others works like musical instrument or anything else, it may be extract my monotony, but not helping me to form the leadership. For example, as my propensity doesn’t inspire me to work with full concentration. As a result in the long run it will be wastage of time. What I mean by this is that if you have no mood in any work and you try to do it, it will be completely loss for your life. Therefore, it will be wise if I use time according to my predilection.
To wrap it up, as the nature of mind of every human-being is completely different, so they ornate his own time whatever he deem as a precious or enjoyable to him. From my purview, I consider that if anyone takes the advantage of free time, voluntary work will be an effective one for sure as it fills up both demand of our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ire me to work with full concentration. As a result in the long run it will be was...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use time according to my predilection. To wrap it up, as the nature of mind of ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deems'.
Suggestion: deems
...so they ornate his own time whatever he deem as a precious or enjoyable to him. From...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i mean, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 52.1666666667 176% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2940.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 652.0 407.700716846 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50920245399 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05314661074 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80689219854 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 314.0 212.727598566 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481595092025 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 618.680645161 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4691544033 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194832674795 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568664111235 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439386607544 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121927694512 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318279101409 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 86.8835125448 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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