why are some friends important in our lives?
" Friends take Centre stage in our daily life; they can change your life, through and through" Joachim Herz, The Maverick Man, 2005. although some people believe that the ability to make many new friends easily is so important, I beg to differ. I am wholeheartedly disagree with this statement because of this conventional wisdom that the " old things are bad except friends". I am inclined to put forward some arguments to bolster my schemes and opinions in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, by and large, it has been proven by various studies that the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is one of the part and parcel things because it can show the peoples' neuropsychiatric healthiness. According to the novel studies published in PLUS ONE, it seems fair to conclude that this ability could provide important characteristics of the people's healthiness which are using by neuroscientists to evaluate the people's mind. They have provided that if people would like to be healthier and happier, they should maintain their relationships in the balanced situation.
Another thing coming to my mind to substantiate my stand is that peoples' keeping friendships relationship for a long time could provide this opportunity to bolster their unique characteristics such as patience. Owing to the fact that the human beings have variegated attitudes, latitudinarians, and talents, it seems struggling and dealing with these different characteristics could change the peoples ‘attitudes, thoroughly. For example, in the college's dormitories which are steeped with the protean peoples who are coming from various cultures, traditions, or countries peoples have the good condition of tolerance, patience, and happiness. In nutshell, the ability to keep friendships with a small number of people over a long-winded time is important because not only can it help people to improve their second to none characteristics which could help them but also could provide this opportunity to be conversant with different peoples which will help them to be healthier and happier than the past.
In conclusion, although some people believe that the ability to make the new friends is so important, I repudiate this statement totally. In my opinion, the ability to keep the status quo relationships have a lion's share in peoples' happiness. This ability could help them to increase their patience-- is the key factor satiating the peoples-- and could help them to become healthier than the past. Is it the righteous time to ponder over our status quo relationships with our old friends to keep our relationships?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, another thing, for example, in conclusion, such as, by and large, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30516431925 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11606964187 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474178403756 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 674.1 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0217743912 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11011016898 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485829859059 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061624738898 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844885693592 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667307920337 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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