Many people are afraid of leaving their houses because of the spread of crimes. Some think that more actions can be taken to prevent crime from occurring, but others think little can be done. What is your opinion?
“fear of crimes ruins the daily lives” Tara Westover, Educated, 2018. Can people stay at their home due to fear of crimes? Although believing little can be taken to prevent crime from occurring, others think that there are various actions which should be taken to halter crime. As far as I am concerned, I think more actions can be taken to slacken crime from occurring such as increasing police forces, improving education, and providing adequate decent jobs in the society. In the following, I am inclined to put forth some arguments to support my reasons.
First and foremost, it is a conventional wisdom that policemen’s arresting felons and thefts reduces the crime rate effectively. For example, according to an official statistics germane to the prisons in the UK, not only can the harsh punishment reduce the crime rate in felons’ future but also provides an appropriate environment for other citizens. Thus, by increasing police forces the controls or surveillances on the felons will be bolstered, and as a result, along with arrest and punishment, the crime rate will take a nosedive.
Another thing coming to my mind is that education take center stage in providing adequate background for people to ponder over their actions’ consequences as much as possible. As an illustrated case, UT Southwestern University’s surveys shed light on roles of education in reducing the crime rate. The results were impressive. In countries that the citizens receive an adequate education, the crime rate is kept in a standstill. On the other hand, in various poor regions with weak educational goals, the crime rate is escalating. Thus, it seems fair to advise governments to provide an adequate education for their citizens to reduce the crime rate effectively.
Last but not least, there is an indirect or reverse relationship between jobs availability and the crime rate. In other words, in societies with low available jobs, the crime rate will be increased because people need the jobs to pay their own and without those, they will be inclined to do crimes. Therefore, by providing adequate, decent jobs, the government could mitigate the crime rate efficiently.
To wrap things up, despite some people think to stay at home could provide safety for them and they should not go to no-go-areas, others believe that there are various actions to be taken to reduce crime rate: augmenting policeman, amending education, and providing decent jobs for residents can mitigate crime rate drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, still, therefore, thus, another thing, for example, i think, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2125.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23399014778 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94665395672 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6581485188 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.055555556 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279831004786 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093882667154 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110817116595 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176125493565 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12075130495 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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