Sports events get the nations together and help them alleviate the violence in the world.
“such specific events teach many part-and-parcel lessons to people” Tara Westover, Educated 2018. Do sports events play a major role? Can they reduce violence? As far as I am concerned, sports events play major roles in the lives because they increase people’s communication skills, reduce struggles between nations, and expand cultural interactions. In the following, I am inclined to put forth my schemes and opinion.
First and foremost, sports events get the nations together by augmenting participants’ communication skills. For instance, in the Olympic event 2004, despite the intensified political conflicts between the USA and North Korea, two athletes with such different nations got married. Indeed, they confirmed that the political struggles are not important in the people’s lives. Thus, it seems fair to hold that the sports events, such as Olympics, tie nations’ hearts together and reduces the unwarranted violence.
Another thing coming to the mind, as the Olympics’ flag shows, is alliance. In fact, the sports events are the harbinger of important cultural and moral concepts; For instance, when Nazi troops occupied the Italy, despite the deep sense of hatred between the two military troops, people held the sports’ festivals. As a result, it reduced the violence between two countries for a short time. Therefore, these events have affirmed that sports events can reduce the struggles between countries, get the people together, and decrease the violence; thus, it can alter the status quo world to the peaceful one.
Last but not least, there is a conventional wisdom that sports events escalate the people’s knowledge about the different cultures, countries, and traditions. For instance, when a winner team’s national anthem is being broadcasted, it transfers many cultural concepts to the audiences because it reflects the country’s beliefs. As well as, many tourists coming to the holder sports events country, buying various souvenirs which are derived from the cultural or traditional events of the country. Hence, they act like a cultural messenger to transfer the concepts to other countries and as a result, they get the nations together as much as possible.
To wrap things up, nevertheless believing that the sports events are just for entertainment, many people postulate that they take a center stage in getting the nations together and mitigating the international violence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, another thing, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61066666667 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0419362255 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549333333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1720283657 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280246788263 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975485296816 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752547619467 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177624801674 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351935741719 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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