Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
While some people go to the gym as a routine to keep themselves in feet, there are some people who do love different kinds of sport. But not everyone is in love with dangerous activities such as diving, jumping, or skydiving. I find some reasons why people may like such extreme sports.
The first of them is that these people have the purpose to show other people that they are better and braver than the last ones. Sometimes people are ready to jump from a high mountain in order to be respected by their friends or family members. Such kind of people may be called posers, and they concern only about other people’s opinion, but not sport. For example, the young may act like this if they want to show classmates or friends how cool they are.
The second reason might be that people are so bored of everyday life, that they are ready to use dangerous activates as the way to differ this boredom. Day after day most of people go to their work in the mornings, then come back home in the evenings. This might lead to a kind of depression for some people, who used to live active lifestyle. That’s why they can find their hobby in diving or hunting, because it can be fun and not so usual and ordinary. For example, I have got a friend who really loves diving. Once he has said me that joined the diving club just because he thought it would help him to bring bright colors in his boring everyday life.
But I think that most people enjoy dangerous sports, because they really like it. These people may love the level of fear which they got when they are snowboarding down with a high speed. Some people say they cannot live without extreme activities, because they help them to be in a good physical shape, but, moreover, to feel undescribed feeling when they practice them. I do agree with this people, because I am one of them. Last year I started skateboarding, despite the fact it may be traumatic, I want to continue this occupation. I love the feeling of speed when I am driving.
To sum up, everyone finds his own reason to love dangerous kinds of sport: some do it to boast; some to color their life, but most people just enjoy this, because it brings you unforgettable feelings and emotions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...y to differ this boredom. Day after day most of people go to their work in the mornings, then ...
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Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...nd who really loves diving. Once he has said me that joined the diving club just bec...
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Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hen they practice them. I do agree with this people, because I am one of them. Last ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, then, while, for example, i think, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5099009901 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34019698094 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0748097987 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22936491159 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761765680374 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717952529279 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158051499209 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720035172378 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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