Why go to university?
Even though many scholars and some of the people argue as if it is a general truth that universities and colleges are not the best situations for young children and they cannot achieve any valuable thing at there, I firmly recommend that education centers are the excellent conditions for students who spend several of their time at there. This way is helpful to learn various sciences and fields, have a perfect future job, and obtain an efficient relationship with social people. And believe it or not, students need to be a proficient person in the community. I will elaborate my idea with some significant reasons in the following paragraphs.
One of the meaningful reason coming to my mind at first is that today by evolving different technologies and methods, students require more knowledge and wisdom to intensifying their information and concepts. For reach to this level of understanding, universities and instructional are the wonderful circumstances for them. Student not only can learn lots of novel awareness from the books, but also can discover and find more fundamentally experience such as who to manage their time. As an example, when I accepted in university I had poor information in computer field and I have not known who set up the software of GIS, however, I am an expert person in this major. As you can see, the universities are good place for youth people to enhance their concepts.
Another remarkable reason is that when people are skilled and have a high-level educations, they can find a better job in their future. Needless to say, more companies and factories utilitarian will accept people in their institutes who have a high level of adept. For clear this statement I bring an illustration, when I finished high school I applied in many companies to find a job, at that time have never received me in their work. As a matter of fact, after I graduated in university I have a great chance to work in environmental office as an engineer.
Last but not least, students have to learn who participate in a group as a coworker and assistant in a team-work. Instruction centers as a superior location prepare this condition for persons to increasing their social skill. For instance, professors in the colleges have more projects that student can work on them and learn who treat with each other at there.
As a result, all of reasons mentioned above are few reasons that why students need to go in university. I strongly suggest that parents encourage and motivate their children go to this sites to earn a useful knowledge, future job and life and also better community relationship. As I am a student, I am satisfied, therefore I will have a clear future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90642913625 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511982570806 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 711.9 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2611012077 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.947368421 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110207883254 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345593758952 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529361582927 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06163761891 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551355566582 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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