why people go to museums?
Nowadays most people live in cities. Cities main elements are streets which are the principal vein of the modern life. These veins correlate different parts of the towns. Other essential elements of modern cities are high rise sky scrapers, building, and even factories. Among this mechanic life, people demand places to escape from ordinary life. Such places are designed and implemented by governments and municipalities like; parks, museums, and Amusement Park.
To compare between museums and parks as amusement places. There are several important points to note. First, museums divide into two major groups of science and culture. Science museums aim to enhance the people knowledge level simultaneously with entertaining them Whereas culture museums main goal is to introduce different societies culture through entertaining them.
Museums are most of the time a quiet place with tranquility. Lights designs help you to focus on the historical objects, invaluable carpets, ancient coins and even mommies. There is always a museum leader to help you find out more about exhibiting materials. Parents tend to show various museums to their children cause it helps them to experience science and culture with their kids. As a result, museums bring both entertainment and knowledge about diverse categories.
There is another important point of museums in my country, the museum's ticket is always cheaper than cinemas and other entertaining places, and it is a good reason for people to visit museums more often. In fact, this reduction in museum ticket was a government policy to increase book reading per capita as they believe visiting museums has a direct relationship with annual book reading.
As a conclusion, people tend to visit museums for two different reasons in my country. Money issues, entertaining and of course increasing knowledge level in the twenty-first century. Looking back to people life will surely enhance everyday life and impede war organization.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, whereas, in fact, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72439551384 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2783248434 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262341274599 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763053081862 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681647344901 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153172240882 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057033958302 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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