Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
We live in the twenty-one century, the communication century. Nowadays, with 300 million human population over the world, everything is competitive. Accordingly, without having a successful plan, aims path will be disguised through life complexity.
I think it is essential to have a tight schedule to stand top in every situation, whether it is educational purposes or economic issues. Although acquiring skills to boost your organizational abilities is experimental, but some of them can be found in adolescent ages with parents help. For example, entering university is competitive in my country, and it needs programming. As a sensible parent, you have to teach your kids to start studying and scheduling their curriculum.
Both government and family are responsible to build youngster characterization because they are the future politicians, doctors, engineers, and artists and they want to manage the country. Destroying them would probably affect our descendants' destiny. The ability to plan and organize let them strongly encounter life difficulties.
For instance, my cousin has a high level of planning ability from his childhood. He knows when to attack in strategies video games, the appropriate time to study, and even the best time to have fun. These were the result of his father organizational training. These also help him to enter the best university of our country without too much effort. When he was only eighteen years old, he knows how to play piano, violin, and paint like artists. After two years of attending university, he mastered all relevant software. My brother, in contrast to him, was unable to do any kind of leisure activity, programming or artworks. He never had time to do so, due to lack of organizational planning.
All in all, in my opinion, I believe every child should be trained to be a good self-organizer. It has invaluable results which will be revealed life time. I would probably try to act the same to make life easier for the youngsters by teaching them how to plan before they act.
Not only for young people, it is also recommended for us to schedule our own time. Time is Gold! Try to use it in the best way until inventors create the time machine. Good luck and enjoy the lifetime, the most precious gift of God.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...valuable results which will be revealed life time. I would probably try to act the same t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03978779841 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99291707968 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628647214854 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4842570937 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1666666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7083333333 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17222875477 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417672942817 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053310412667 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819437154525 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169376553243 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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