TPO48-Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We live in the twenty-one century, the communication century. Nowadays with 300 million human population over the world, everything is competitive. Accordingly, without having a successful planning, aims path will be disguised through life complexity.
I think it is essential to have a tight schedule to stand top in every situation. Whether it is educational purposes or economic issues. Although acquiring skills to boost your organization abilities is experimental, but some of them can be founded in adolescent ages with parents help. For example, entering university is competitive in my country and it needs programming. As a sensible parent, you have to teach your kids to start studying and scheulizing their curriculum.
Both government and family are responsible to build youngster characterization because they are the future politicians, doctors, engineers, and artists and they want to role the country. Destroying them would probably affects our descendants destiny. The ability to plan and organize let them strongly encounter life difficulties.
For instance, my cousin has a high level of planning ability from his childhood. He knows when to attack in strategies video games, when to study, and even the best time to have fun. These were the result of his father organization planning trainings. These also help him to enter the best university of our country without too much effort. When he was only eighteen years old he knows how to play piano, violin, and paint like artists. After two years of attending university, he mastered all relevant softwares. My brother, in contrast to him was unable to do any kind of leisure activity, programming or artworks. He never had time to do so, due to lack of organization planning.
All in all, in my idea I believe every child should be trained to be a good self-organizer. It has invaluable results which will be revealed life long. I would probably try to act the same to make life easier for the youngsters by teaching them how to plan before they act.
Not only for young people, it is also recommended for us to schedule our own time. Time is Gold! Try to use it in the best way until inventors create a time machine. Good luck and enjoy the life time , the most precious gift of God.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...ountry. Destroying them would probably affects our descendants destiny. The ability t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m strongly encounter life difficulties. For instance, my cousin has a high level...
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Line 6, column 191, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...a time machine. Good luck and enjoy the life time , the most precious gift of God.
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Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...chine. Good luck and enjoy the life time , the most precious gift of God.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, kind of, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99204244032 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95519579076 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623342175066 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5587114555 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.28 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.08 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15204875857 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374873992918 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423380512015 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722154507307 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241570865954 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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