sports or libraries?
Lessons are not the only courses and amenity which a university offers to its undergraduate and post graduate students. There are a plenty of facilities like; dorms, libraries, sports clubs, and night clubs which a university must offer to its student to flourish their abilities and entertain them.
Some universities offer accessibility to sports activities, for example, swimming, football, soccer, and even skating while others offer only a few indoor activities like volleyball, Ping-Pong, and karate which costs only a small saloon inside the University gamut. However such universities may have a gigantic system of libraries, due to students demands.
In my country Iran, the top universities which accept the best students from all over the country only offer a few indoor sports activities and their strategies are because of making a concentration to studying and researching. To better illustrate my assertation, let me give you an example. For instance Amirkabir university of technology the best renown university of technology in Iran, which I attend my master of science there- only offers football and swimming under the sports title. But the complex science building presents a titanic set of libraries in various fields like civil engineering, electronic engineering, and other basic sciences like physics and mathematics. To its contrast, the university lacks any historic and literature libraries, which I think is a very crucial issue. However other universities like open universities offer wide verities of sports, they lack any libraries amenities.
I do believe that both sports and libraries are two Inseparable parts of a university life. Sport strengthen the body and books, I mean different books with different topics, strengthen the mind. Simuntansly they build persons character to be ready for future life and difficulties.
There are two ways for the universities to compensate this deficiency. First, they can use each other's facilities by signing a mutual contraction. Others can ask the society and government to supply them with money.
As a result, I think sports clubs and libraries are supplementary. And any shortage of facilities mentioned above can lead to a university rank descending.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4710982659 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0568321829 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56936416185 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6439021336 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209039218986 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773755540581 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120305142059 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128868036221 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969674112778 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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