Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having an amazing work environment is considered to be the main passion for most employees. This perfect habitat allows them to increase their productivity and creativity during work. Personally, I think workers will like having a career with different kind of tasks. I feel this way for a couple of reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, having a different type of duties in work enable workers to break the daily routine of the job. Employees always become frustrated when they do the exact tasks for several days. This boring environment has a negative impact on their productivity during work. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I started working in Edgewood Pharmacy, I had too much energy because it was the first time for me to work in the United States as a pharmacist. During my first day, I began to fill most of the patient’s prescriptions; and my friend Ahmed has another task, he was entering prescriptions in the system and checking the patient’s profile. By the end of the month, I was doing the same filling duties. At that time, I really felt disappointed and bored. I had thoughts to leave the work and apply for another one because my productivity in work had decreased. Moreover, I was not like before thinking out of the box with any new ideas because the routine killed everything in me.
Adding to the previous point, when workers do different tasks, they would expand their knowledge. Therefore, they will make their résumé much stronger. For instance, When I worked at King Faisal Hospital back in my hometown, I was able to work in different pharmacy fields such as drug compounding and intervenes preparations. Thus, I learned many techniques such as mixing antibiotics for cancer patients which strengthen my biography and allowed me to get several promotions.
In conclusion, I encourage employees to work in multiple tasks environment. This is not only because they will break the routine of the work, but also, they will broaden their experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...so, they will broaden their experience.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95058139535 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88499684592 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561046511628 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8026066986 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.15 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187008388518 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611726380457 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644604359135 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117683838046 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384140378411 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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