Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is the responsibility of the government to provide health care to everyone living in that country.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether governments are responsible for the health care services for their citizens or not. Personally, I think the duty of all governments around the world is to supply perfect services for all citizens and improve the living outcomes. Thus, they have to give suitable health care for all people in the country.
To begin with, most authorities used to take taxes from citizens. They deduct more than 30% of the salary that employees receive. Therefore, these people need to take some services in return. For example, in the United States, the government deduct almost thirty percent of citizen’s monthly salary in order to have some budget to offer the best services for people. Thus, this enormous amount of money gives the people the right to ask the government for a perfect health care services in return.
Adding to the previous point, citizens are putting most of their effort to develop their countries. So, their basic right is to get some health care as a reward from the government. They do not have to struggle to look for clinical services when they have health issues.
On top of that, the government has to provide these clinical services to its citizens to increase their loyalty to the country. For instance, the government in Saudi Arabia provides free health services for all citizens. Hence, most Saudi people feel satisfied with all free health benefits from the government. They do not want to leave the country because of this unique advantage. Thus, they become more loyal to the country. However, when people have difficulties getting some clinical benefits, they tend to become upset and sometimes create problems for the government such as protesting on the street and burning some public amenities. So, they become less loyal to the government.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments are responsible to give health care services to all people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05590062112 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57175861296 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472049689441 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2333274536 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6842105263 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146805707381 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558558638814 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430736884919 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104701813362 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351116022653 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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