Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some types of jobs may require doing more than one different task in the same day. I agree with the opinion that workers are more satisfied when they have different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. I'm going to explain my point of view in the next paragraphs.
To begin with, the more varied the tasks you do in one workday, the less bored you are. It goes without saying that doing different missions is likely to make people more enthusiastic than doing the same things over and over. It creates an atmosphere of motivation and curiosity. On the other hand, doing routinely jobs will definitely make people to be more lethargic. I have read once in some research that whenever the tasks of the workday are different from one another, that leads to more positive attitude of the works and will boost the overall warm mood, furthermore, it enhances the chances of being more creative and motivated. Even in our normal life, everyone agrees that the repetitive works that are done on daily basis will probably be more tedious and usually we do it like machines without any feelings, which is completely the opposite in case of doing new things every time.
Second, workers who go through different types of tasks during the workday tend to be more experienced on the long run, which will improve the quality of the workers efficiency at the end. Furthermore, the availability of workers who are able to do more than one task can be very helpful in case of emergency, they will fill any empty position immediately helping to keep the progress of the work goes in the right way. After all, those adept and multitask workers will be a great asset that added to the value of the company. The human, in spite of all the technological advancement, still the most important factor in any organization or work environment.
To recap, many tasks means more experienced and skillful workers. It also increases the chances of having more productive work environment. Therefore, it is really helpful to do different tasks in your work to avoid the boredom and to create positive cozy work circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, really, second, so, still, therefore, thus, after all, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75871313673 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5713684461 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514745308311 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9121675401 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.9375 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437719516617 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145685189253 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167050520873 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302518385968 0.150856017488 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175876310212 0.0645574589148 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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