By and large, the efficiency of work force in the modern era is vital for corporations to flourish. A satisfied worker would be more productive and innovativ and thereby would bring more profit to the company. While there are a plathora of people who are in conviction that doing a specific task by a worker would result in satisfied workers, others hold an opposite point of view asserting that the variety of the tasks would result better. To the extend that my personal perspective is concerned i accord with the second group. among the countless reasons which adhere my point of view, i will delve into most conspicious ones in what follows.
First of all, doing one task over and over by a single person can result in boredom.Since the thoughts of work forces can be reflected in their work, the depression and boredom can be quite catastrophic in a working environment .For instance i remember when i was working in my brothers restAurant as i was 19 and he put me in charge of pealing potatoes. It was exhausting. I kept pealing for almost 10 hours a day and after a while i was depressed. it seemed like my life has no purpose and that i was just throwing a way my precious hours. After a while i just had no motivation to keep it up and after a while i got fired for he believed i didnt meet the supply requirements.
Secondly one can easily taken for granted since all his talents remain dormant through doing just one job which he may not be able to perform properly. For instance as my brother expelled me from kitchen, another opportunity opened up in the waiting section which involved both making the juice and serving It. Turned out i was quite a people person. Customers kept giving me and my brother,whom owned the restaurant, compelements about my excessive public relation potent and were unexpectedly generous in their tips. I was suddenly popular for my special juices and was more enthusiastic toward my work since i intended to keep them happy.as a matter of fact the times in which i was serving gave me a lot of space to think and took the pressure of my shoulders so i was more focoused during the time i was making the juice. The diversity of tasks gave me an opportunity to find my passion and a little time off from what i did gave me the chance to look it from other prespectives as well.
In short, all of the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that multitasking gives a chance to workers to be more productive and more efficeint and there by more satisfied with what they do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in short, as a matter of fact, by and large, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70307750553 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0362412519 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4375 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143554296405 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456504316699 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669495500553 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120547695822 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806982211381 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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