Admittedly, workers play a pivotal role in the processing of developing countries. the more skilled full labor the better-developed countries. Some people believe that having many different skills would help the producer to become happier rather than doing one job. however, others disagree. As far as I am concern, engaging with multiple tasks would have some benefits for employees. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First and for most, it is good to say that, if you gain different skills Throughout your lifetime especially in your youngster's age, you will be more useful in your career process. In other words, the more once being skillful craft the more being beneficial in his professional environment. One of my own examples is a good case in point. When I was studied in universities I had decided to engage myself in different part-time jobs which one of my professors had suggested to me. I was recommended to the big company which was an important stage of my life, because, I had gained the opportunities to surround myself with different activities as a volunteer. What was quite important for me was that to fain various skills over the course of my part-tie job. During that time, I feel a sense of satisfaction because I have gain different skills which were drastically useful for my futures job.
Second, people with kinds of abilities have a great chance to become wealthier. In fact, one who has more skills would have a great chance to join a big group of businesses which is absolutely making more money for them. One recent study represents the result of the number of skillful employees in groups of the company. What was really obvious, was companies are now needed professional and crafty and hand experience people which could be more effective for them. These circumstances show that, if people gain more tasks and duty during their career time, they would have a bigger chance to employees in such a big company with greater income.
In conclusion, I firmly agree that grasping various knowledge and skills through your job is not only make you handy and useful one but also gives you a chance to become enhance your wage and income, which is kind of satisfying.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...y own examples is a good case in point. When I was studied in universities I had dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85378590078 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70349618098 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532637075718 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4790897715 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8421052632 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164509004326 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484225340242 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401999894285 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950455025028 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320034195354 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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