Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Blue colores are one of the most important part of society. They handle a lot of tasks in society, such as public services and factories. Some people believe that having different kinds of tasks during the workday can satisfy more worker, while others assume otherwise. Personally speaking, I support the scond group because of two reasons.
First, different tasks can cause anxiety. When you have different jobs to do, you are always wondering which tasks to begin with, do you finish in time, do all of them will be perfect. By these questions, you inject nervousness and anxiety to yourself. For example, when I was at university, I had a very tough time with with handling different types of tasks. I had to do my thesis on the one hand and work by doing industrial projects to pay my university's fee on the other hand. I was always struggling which task to start, and I did not have concentration for doing any of them. After a while, I realized that I was not doing any of them, which in turn increased my anxiety. For solving this problem, I decided to divide my days. Parts of week, I just worked on my thesis, and rest of week I did my work project. Finally, I baegan to advance and finished them on time. In sum, different tasks can cause anxiety.
Second, different tasks can decrease workers' performances, which in turn can damage workers' health and company's profit. When you have different tasks, you have to use different equipement for different jobs, and this can cause confusion by selecting improper tools. So when these mistakes increase, it can consume a lot of money and time. For instance, my brother in law is a pet, but he has to do a lot of other taske becide curing animals, such as the company's acounting and butcher's shop survilance. As we know for examine animals, pet have to put on special clothes which is different from survilance clothes. So, he always has to change his equipement which consume a lot of time from him. In sum, different tasks can decrease workers' effectiveness.
All and all, I think workers will be more satisfy by doing similar tasks all they long becasue they will more calm and have more performances. Although, doing the sam jobs all day has its disadvantages such as boredness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...of tasks during the workday can satisfy more worker, while others assume otherwise. Persona...
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Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
... at university, I had a very tough time with with handling different types of tasks. I ha...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: brother-in-law
...lot of money and time. For instance, my brother in law is a pet, but he has to do a lot of oth...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_AND_ALL[1]
Message: This phrase is nonstandard. Did you mean 'all in all' (=after all, nevertheless)?
Suggestion: All in all
...ks can decrease workers effectiveness. All and all, I think workers will be more satisfy b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66835443038 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61615407373 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516455696203 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6415924945 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4583333333 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362198702349 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942173089663 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884435968013 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238960756602 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773676043241 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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