Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics:

Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by majduleen on Sun, 11/05/2017 - 09:31

Nowadays we live in a very complex modern world. So, we should to do many and different tasks to fill our days in useful activities. In spite of this, more people prefer doing one task in all their day long. And in my point of view doing many tasks is much more important to live a more comfortable and satisfied life. And the reasons of my view will be analyzed in this essay for further explanation.

First of all, we should learn to do many tasks in our days for different reasons. Firstly, it is very helpful to do many things on the same day, because we can arrange our time in a helpful manner. Also, a verity of tasks is more enjoyable. For example, I spent my day all the time between surfing internet to get the maximum benefit in my studying, and talking with my friends to change my mood and decrease my stress level. Moreover, doing my homework and study will let me get high marks as usual. So, this arrangement makes me more relaxed because I fill my time by useful tasks.

Secondly, doing one task or one type of job is very boring and lead to sense of unproductivity that leads to many problems. For example, a type of office job like the employee that has to for sit a long time, from 8 am until 3 pm and then return to his home to sit in front his television or surf the internet for even more time will lead to many physical, social, and psychological problems. Such as hypertension, high blood sugar, obesity, social exclusion, social isolation. Moreover, psychological problems for instance, depression and isolation.

In conclusion, for all these reasons I think my point of view is strong and solid enough to clarify the importance of doing many and different tasks during our life.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Independent TOEFL Writing

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a helpful manner" with adverb for "helpful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...me day, because we can arrange our time in a helpful manner. Also, a verity of tasks is more enjoya...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52090032154 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5658962518 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514469453376 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7022988193 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246675460083 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999763794663 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874654066631 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176538404207 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675028990024 0.0645574589148 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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