You are helping to select a leader for a student organization, which of the following is the most important to consider in deciding whom to vote for? 1. Honesty 2.the ability to communicate clearly
It goes without saying that leaders should have significant abilities and characteristics to be good guiders. There has been a controversial debate among people trying to choose someone as a leader as to which the most important feature of a good leader. From my perspective, being honest is the most momentous characteristic for people chosen as leaders, and two reasons to support my viewpoint are presented as follows.
To begin with, having an honest leader, organization will reach their goals sooner. It is not a secret to any of that people trust each other based on honesty since they are sure that frank individuals do not life for their benefits they always say the truth which is helpful in any kinds of relationships to purse the purposes eagerly and scape from the clutches of failure and disorganization. Trusting each other, members of community are able to cooperate noticeably without worrying about any lies and misinformation. Needless to say collaborating in a group or organization is a key for success since the fate of groups depends of all members being old and young, so honesty can make everybody productive enough to do their responsibilities as well as possible. Rarely do people enable to accompany together as a group when role model, leader, is a liar. As you can see, this factor can motivate the rest of people who are in the group to trust and keep cooperating with one another.
Furthermore, an honest leader will make a huge change in people's lives by giving them a sense of satisfaction. It is crystal clear that human are considered as social creatures, so communicating with other is vital but is not enough. An organization accounts for some people sharing ideas and they have a special connection; having started trusting the group, the members will definitely be friends because the head of the organization has created a friendly atmosphere by the help of honesty. As a result having friends in work places is so exiting since they are able to express their emotion and even get help. As friends have great impacts on our lives, they will absolutely make us more satisfied with the living. To put it in more vivid picture, when I was a university student, the leader of music club was a total honest person I had ever met, because of her personality all members of the club get along with one another and I found my best friend Zeynab, who inspires me all the time. Had the leader of music club not been frank, I would not have such a good friend.
In sum, not only will members of organizations be able to achieve their goals soon, they will be more satisfied because they will have an opportunity to make friends.
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...collaborating in a group or organization is a key for success since the fate of g...
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...ll have an opportunity to make friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7830802603 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81988319611 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518438177874 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0166070266 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.705882353 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1176470588 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174243125787 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559772765731 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411721226251 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10102503486 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519226681924 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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