You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why?
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
housands of people have a dream to study abroad and in order to chase it is absolutely arduous. There are numerous
things in a journey of studying in other country. Some of the experiences are mesmerizing and lousy too. It is necessary to plan your future and get education from a top schools around the globe. Thinking about your studies out of the town home is amazing I liked it. In my opinion it is not easy task but it provides you a chance to see you life in a different way.
First, the most vital part I loved is getting a degree from the well known school of Unites States. I was born and raised in a third world country and faced the hardest time, that was the time i planned to study abroad. For instance, when i got my approval i was excited but once I reached US it was fascinating. However, in US there is a lot of diversity, meeting people of different culture and religion is significantly interesting.
Secondly, the only negative part of my educational trip was my expenses, I worked day and night to save money for my future educational planning. For example, I belong to a really poor family where you can only thinks about basic needs .In addition, in this I was drown in the debit that is the worst part of it.
Third, making new friend, sharing a room with them in dorm are the bestest thing that happened in my life without them I would not be able to pass my exams of semester. Furthermore, I became sick and hospitalized for a whole month and I do not had any alternative except to quit my semester but my friends helped me they sometimes did my homework and elaborate all the lectures to make me able to give exam. I am delighted that God blessed me with these friends.
In conclusion, in every life time there is always two sides but its up to you how you cope with it either you dislike you have to pay a huge amount of fees or you like making new friends and multitude things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31388888889 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50307064509 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.47138357 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231598989088 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676282403811 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834777584417 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123598621224 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110588839786 0.0645574589148 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.