You have been given a gift of money. Which would you rather spend it on:
a) a piece of jewelry
b) a pair of concert tickets
c) an expensive meal
A gift is a thing that taking by people who have a special person, that person sometimes would be a wife, sometimes would be a student, sometimes would be a worker who work in a company, etc. And, the gift is used for motivate anybody who make an effort for their bosses, teachers, boyfriends or girlfriends. It depends on wherever, whenever, however that gift is used.
First of all, today there are so many different types of gifts in the world, including a piece of jewelry whose has a wife or a husband, a pair of concert tickets which about a singer, and an expensive meal which eaten in a restaurant with friends, employees or employers. Some parts of these gifts are a cheap but other would be the expensive.
Also, gifting is a method which used for improve productivity of employees, students, children up in their environments. For example, in universities, there would be a several types of students who compete each other for a good grade. In their competition, teacher could offer a high level note for their members of school, because their students' concentrations would be up for reaching their the good grades. If we give another example it would be the jewelry which taking by couples who live together. And, that gift is the best for women, and it solve many problems with them definitely, and perfectly. Then, the book, it is the perfect for people who would like to read more than the others.
In conclusion, taking account of all above examples, which options is the best it depends on why it is used by people. So, people who want to choose gift should definitely prefer a for girlfriend, and they should select b for their friends, and the last option for their families.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
.... First of all, today there are so many different types of gifts in the world, including ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... up for reaching their the good grades. If we give another example it would be the...
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Message: Did you mean 'solves'?
Suggestion: solves
...that gift is the best for women, and it solve many problems with them definitely, and...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oose gift should definitely prefer a for girlfriend, and they should select b for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71906354515 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64335097794 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3577926502 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14491490838 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579503642401 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471862070526 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106832034257 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070326525753 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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