Question: A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
Nowadays, different types of factories are everywhere, some of these are sometimes bad such as making chemical compounds, and others are good like textile factory.All of them effect environment and people who live near factories buildings.
First of all, new factories means to their buildings towns or cities new job oppurtunities.In place where it is built people would choose new job which earn so many money.In the large factory, there are several social activities, these supply to workers good sense.So, employment rate raises if new factory are opened there.
Also,new factory effects positively their new building area, because all of these factories improve other activities around them.For instance, if new factory are launched in the community there will be new restaurants, cafes, cinemas and any other places, and people in that places might earn much money.
In addition, new factory creates a competition towards other factories which work same kind of trade.This improves a good quality of all products, and that quality effects products which selling to customer.For competition, workers have to work concentratedly and effectively.
In contrast, new large factories where build the any communities influence negatively such as gas factory or chemical company.Because, these type of factories use method which pollute to air or rivers, then if people use that polluted things they would be ill or sick.So, that people injured badly.
In my opinion, there is one disadvantage but there are several advantages, so taking account of all advantages i support opening new large factory in my community or in any other places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45703125 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89951915043 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3695901307 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 232.833333333 100.406767564 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 20.6045352989 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 5.45110844103 358% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206258246937 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117950647725 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309087151612 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117950647725 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309087151612 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 11.7677419355 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 58.1214874552 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.1575268817 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 10.9000537634 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.01818996416 127% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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