A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
The debate on what are the pros and cons of building factories near the communities has been garnering a wide range of views. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of elements should be taken into consideration to examine the constructive and destructive facets of this issue. Some people posit that constructing a new factory near the community would bring many benefits to the community. On the other hand, some others take the opposite side and disagree. From my vantage point, building a factory would bring many benefits to the community. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite point to be considered is that the residents in the community will be able to find more job opportunities in this factory. so, the local's people lifestyle will improve remarkably. Secondly, the factory will need roads with high-quality standards so they can transport their goods and products to other cities. As a result, the infrastructure in the local city will improve significantly. Thirdly, hiring more workers means a gradual increase in the population of the local city. As a result, the government will pay more attention to other facets of infrastructure in the city from education to the health care system.
However, the constructing of a factory near local cities will cause some problems. First, the manufacturing process inside the plant always emits various kinds of pollutants, such as carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide will pollute the air in the local city. Moreover, the factories often dispose of some contaminants in water sources in the communities which may cause serious health problems. Second, The land required for the establishment of the factory might be acquired by deforestation or seizing fertile farmland which would have serious long-run consequences in our community. Another disadvantage which deserves some words to say is the traffic jam problem, that will appear due to the climbing numbers of vehicles used to transport goods from the factory to other cities.
To wrap it up, the construction process of a factory near the community has pros and cons. the pros include, increase in job opportunities in the local city and enhance the lifestyle of the residents. On the other hand, the cons include road congestion problems, water, and air pollution problems in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, i feel, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18961038961 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89878741202 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511688311688 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 13.0 3.08781362007 421% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9959933839 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137468110229 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465442514713 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556262963714 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873799008291 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587436619694 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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