A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
An old man of my neighbor discussed his past and present during a morning walk on the week. He had said that the living cost rises in such a way that the people feel hard to survive with current income. In this context, the establishment of a large factory is boon for our society. A factory has both negative and positive impacts in society however positive one overweights the negative side. I fully agree with the announcement of a company due to some reasons which I am going to explain in the following paragraph.
Firstly, the company provided employment to many people of locality as well as bring happiness. Although many people are skill-full and educated, they are not getting a satisfactory job. A large company may provide jobs in large skills and variety so people can enjoy their best job near their home. Most of the people go out of the village to work so people spend more than one hour in travel. Working near the village decreases the daily cost and stress of travel. People can enjoy more time with family and friends. For example, Many people in Pokhara, one of the best tourism places in Nepal, have a job in the hotel and trekking field, where people go to the office at 9:00 am and return at 5:00 pm so they spend many hours with their family members. If the company stats here in our village, we may enjoy a happy life as in Pokhara.
Secondly, the value of land will increase and the village will be changed into town. With the entry of the company there will be increases in population, starts the construction of roads and an increase in facilities. Gradually large buildings, banks, supermarkets, etc, will be established. Those people who have no good job can start the business by selling a piece of land. People can start small businesses in their homes for their survival. Bank provides easy loans to entrepreneurs having their own land.. For example, most of the banks in Kathmandu, in the capital of Nepal, are ready to provide loans to landowner whereas they hardly support the new businessman.
In contrast to my opinions, there are many black sides of the industry. For example, fertile land will be turned in to housing plotting and buried by a large building that affects the ecology and creates land pollution. Smoke causes air pollution and the effect on public health. Overpopulation may increase crime and security threats. Today’s peaceful life will turn in to busy and self-fish. For example, many large cities in the world are facing many problems like pollution, crime, theft, cultural influences, etc.
After coxing and boxing the above issue, I consider that the establishment of a large company in our locality will be very beneficial to us in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77282377919 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5840167643 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532908704883 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9894361908 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2592592593 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832672034468 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0235234239325 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307947191968 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506220210592 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031885932359 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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