A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
An old man of my neighbor discussed about his past and present during morning walk on week. He had said that the living cost rises in such a way that the people feel hard to survive with current income. In this contest, the establishment of a large factory is boon for our society. A factory has both negative and positive impact in society however positive one overweights the negative side. I fully agree with the announcement of a company due to some reasons which I am going to explain in following paragraph.
Firstly, company provided employment to many people of locality as well as bring happiness. Although many people are skill-full and educated, they are not getting satisfactory job. A large company may provide job in large skills and variety so people can enjoy their best job near their home. Most of the people go out of the village for work so people spend more than one hour in travel. Working near village decreases the daily cost and stress of travel. People can enjoy their more time with family and friends. For example, Many people in Pokhara, one of the best tourism place in Nepal, have job in hotel and trekking field, where people go to office at 9:00 am and return at 5:00 pm so they spend many hours with their family members. If company stats here in our village, we may enjoy happy life as in Pokhara.
Secondly, value of land will increases and village will be changed in to town. With the entry of company there will be increases in population, starts the construction of road and increase in facilities. Gradually large building, bank, supermarket, etc, will be established. Those people who have no good job can start business by selling a piece of land. People can stars small business in their home for their survival. Bank provides easy loan to entrepreneurs having their own land.. For example most of the bank in Kathmandu, in capital of Nepal, are ready to provide loan to land owner where as they hardly support to the new businessman.
In contrast to my opinions, there are many black side of industry. For example, fertile land will be turn in to housing plotting and buried by large building which effects in ecology and creates land pollution. Smoke causes air pollution and effect on public health. Over population may increase crime and security threat. Today’s peaceful life will turn in to busy and self-fish. For example many large cities in the world are facing many problems like pollution, crime, theft, cultural influences, etc.
After coxing and boxing of the above issue, I consider that establishment of a large company in our locality will be very beneficial to us in many ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: increase
...Pokhara. Secondly, value of land will increases and village will be changed in to town....
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...n to entrepreneurs having their own land.. For example most of the bank in Kathman...
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Suggestion: whereas
...are ready to provide loan to land owner where as they hardly support to the new business...
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... crime, theft, cultural influences, etc. After coxing and boxing of the above iss...
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Suggestion:
... be very beneficial to us in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79475982533 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52717067057 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543668122271 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5559647041 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.962962963 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817202380795 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234315166713 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307416378208 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0501277955683 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317232451877 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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