what is the one thing to improve your community?
Some new technologies increase our flexibility, and influence our freedom about working where i am in any time. Cell phone is one these effective things.
There are many reasons. First of all, cell phone is used in anywhere and anytime when do you need. For example, it is used for calling to Police, Bank, Postoffice or anything which people need. Another example is modem function of cell phone, some people are work on IT and they have to connect to server with their computers, and for this issue they use it for connection between their clients and far servers. This functionality supply time efficiency and place flexibility.
Also , todays cellphones are as similar as computers which usually use android and ios. These types of operating systems as efficiency as computers. For instance, people can install application tools which like Ms Word, ms excel and any other programs which writing document for jobs or educations. Whatif, i am on the train for travel and i must to send Money to my parents, for this issue i can use bank application.
In conclusion, cellphone is effective thing that improve my community and other communities. People always carry it in their pockets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...fluence our freedom about working where i am in any time. Cell phone is one these...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...efficiency and place flexibility. Also , todays cellphones are as similar as com...
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Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ocument for jobs or educations. Whatif, i am on the train for travel and i must t...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hatif, i am on the train for travel and i must to send Money to my parents, for t...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...tif, i am on the train for travel and i must to send Money to my parents, for this issu...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...end Money to my parents, for this issue i can use bank application. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 52.1666666667 35% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71543734967 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 618.680645161 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.7245668094 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5384615385 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0567776626558 0.236089414692 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271150502152 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716746284023 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061850505917 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829763501129 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.