Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

An ability that telling the truth which done by people is a behaviour. I think it is one of the best behaviour among all types of behaviours. Some people do it but some parts people could not be in this a true position which about that statement.

First of all, all people should be truth in anytime or in anywhere such as working on their job environment with colleagues of them, living in their home with their families, studying in their schools with one of more than one of their classmates. And, it is sometimes could be a rule, in some countries these could be a ritual and it may be a title in a religion. For example, in all Islāmic countries if people say lie they had to been took punishment which about their religion. On the other hand, people of country such as Germany have not to say lie because their country has strict laws about telling truth.

In addition, there are several problems caused by telling truth in community where people live, study, work such like families' homes , street, campuses of universities. For examle, let's think marriages, sometimes there could be any arguments between husbands and wifes about where they are, what they do, or who speak with them. If people say true about issues that parents could fight, may be they shout each other, and they could be divorced.

Moreover, that approach that telling real things sometimes causes worries. For instance, sick people always in depression, they usually think their bad diseases, they want to be good. But, while an ill person in negative feelings their friends and doctors do not tell them a reality, because that kind of speaking impact their treatments.

In conclusion, although there are several problem which resulted by telling truth, all people should say everything in real, I do not agree that statement definitely.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
... First of all, all people should be truth in anytime or in anywhere such as worki...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...ries if people say lie they had to been took punishment which about their religion. ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve, study, work such like families homes , street, campuses of universities. For e...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... about issues that parents could fight, may be they shout each other, and they could b...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'several problems'.
Suggestion: several problems
.... In conclusion, although there are several problem which resulted by telling truth, all pe...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
... conclusion, although there are several problem which resulted by telling truth, all pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84025559105 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45400093171 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2149481074 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.214285714 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 5.45110844103 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122230343929 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530367039563 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446921976826 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895480445949 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370037568483 0.0645574589148 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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