Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

All Teachers may be role models to their students, and they should be careful to class members.Because their abilities and behaviours impact and effect their students where are studying at their school.

First of all, the first task of teachers is that teaching their students, and they have to concentrate improving students' studying skills and performances of them.Because, youngs are learned all kind of studying environments things such as mathematics, science, biology and so on. They always listen their authors in lessons which about working environment.So, they are effected by their teachers obviously and harshly.

Also, there are many different activities in class like playing games and any other social interactions.These type of relationships influence students severely. Because they do not know how they behave in crowded and they could be failed in their community.But, they can learn rapidly.For that reason, consultant of students always interested in them when they need their consultants.

In addition, the youngs do not select candidate or party on election days.Older people could be in this political situations because they have rights which about chose the party, so teachers do not consume their times for tell or explain their political views.

In my opinion, taking account of all above's reasons, teachers have to teach only lessons and can teach social behaviours or views too, in contrast they do not define their political principles to their student because this is waste of times.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, in addition, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 237.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44303797468 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92780793786 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57805907173 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1129623164 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.285714286 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5714285714 5.45110844103 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182109614718 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972426393478 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408271565351 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119830280327 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296918478339 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 11.7677419355 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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