You have a choice of movies to see. What influences you the most in choosing which movie to see ?
Movies are a big part of our culture and for decades now going to the movie theatre has been one of the most frequent hobby. Thousands of movies are coming out every year and the kinds of movies are diverse and we may be influenced to choose a specific movie from another. From my point of view, if I have a choice of movies to see, I may be more influenced by the kind of movie than by the actors in it or the critics. This essay will further discuss reasons to support my point of view.
Firstly, the play of actors depends very much from a movie to an other. You may have liked 4 movies from Leonardo DiCaprio and not like the last one, as it happens to me with “The Revenant”. In fact, I am fond of Leonardo DiCaprio because he usually plays in comedies and thrillers, whereas this movie is based on adventure. Consequently, this example is one of the reasons that shows that the kind of the movie which will define my choice.
Secondly, I am not fond of critics because people's opinion can be biased by their prejudices or by their experience. For instance, every time I watch a thriller about a person’s life whom I know, I will think that it is not correct. Similarly, someone who has experienced rape will certainly not like the kind of movies that speaks about it and will think that is not directed correctly and does not represent the reality. For this reason, people’s opinion can differ much and I prefer not to refer myself at their opinions.
Finally, even if I am only 22 years old, I have seen a lot of movies and I know which movie I will enjoy more. I trust myself more than someone else. For instance, if two movies are available on Netflix or at the movie theatre, one is a comedy that has a 3 stars ranking and the other one is a horror movie with a 5 stars ranking, I will for sure go to see the comedy.
To conclude, I’d say that I will choose a movie by its kind because I have experienced all of them and I trust my feelings despite the opinions and actors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
...ctors depends very much from a movie to an other. You may have liked 4 movies from Leona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, whereas, for instance, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.327176781 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48588303335 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488126649077 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9297664069 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329727193832 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103349130478 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936890964634 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179463937092 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102804516022 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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