You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
Traveling the world is something I have dreamed about doing ever since I was a small child. If I was given the choice of traveling to a country of my choosing, I would definitely visit Peru. There are two main reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, Peru is a land of varied landscapes and I believe that getting in touch with nature is the best way to enjoy a vacation. Peru is unique in that it contains a tropical rainforest, some of the highest mountains in the world and even pristine beaches – all within close proximity to each other. Few countries offer easier access to such a plethora of natural wonders. One similar country is the United States; I remember that when I traveled across that country several years I was struck by how many different natural environments I was able to experience. I felt that seeing such scenes helped me really get to know America. I think that I could have a similar experience in Peru and because that country is much smaller I would have an easier and more affordable vacation.
Secondly, Peru is attractive because it has an extremely varied national cuisine. I have heard that Peruvian food has been influenced by quite a few sources, including Spanish settlers, local indigenous groups and recent immigrants from the rest of the continent. Not only that but visitors to Peru can choose from several different dining venues, ranging from chic modern restaurants to charming street vendors. I feel that eating the food of a place is another great way to really get to know a society. I recall that when I visited Japan during my last summer vacation I felt at one with the Japanese people when I visited a local sushi restaurant. I am certain that I would enjoy a similar feeling dining in Peru which would make a visit to that country very worthwhile.
In conclusion, if I could visit any country in the world, I would choose to travel to Peru. I feel this way because of Peru’s amazing natural environment and its tantalizingly varied national cuisine.
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...easier and more affordable vacation. Secondly, Peru is attractive because it ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'i feel', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.194373401535 0.229887763892 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.179028132992 0.158761421928 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.120204603581 0.0866891130778 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0332480818414 0.046263068375 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0818414322251 0.0685040099705 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115089514066 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0460358056266 0.0351676179071 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61920458917 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358056265985 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0971867007673 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230179028133 0.0209618222197 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0179028132992 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2133.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 363.0 408.028673835 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87603305785 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347107438017 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247933884298 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151515151515 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0936639118457 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61920458917 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534435261708 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.3509143822 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 21.3529411765 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0374354714 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.470588235 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.5533526081 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 46.1463296062 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.20869565217 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279534025861 0.300154397459 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0837568370156 0.103427244359 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0729545344036 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.469196987416 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111432590632 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109419218738 0.114077575197 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754350261557 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325682518064 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0967055870898 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208388324477 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101633509082 0.0618886996521 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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