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Second, playing video games can adversely affect students’ mental and physical health. To elucidate this point, video games mainly contains inappropriate contents which have adverse effects on students’ mind. Indeed, those games full violent scenes, and young students tend to imitate those actions. Therefore, students will be aggressive in their life. Furthermore, if young students spend a great deal of time playing video games, they will sit in front of electronic devices for a long time. Owing to the sedentary lifestyle, students are more likely exposed to a lot of chronic diseases. Back to my example. Because my cousin played video games for a long time, and he did not do any physical activity, he became overweight which brought chronic disease. Finally, he loses his eyes sight owing to diabetes. In fact, the more playing video games, the less having a healthy life.
From what I have discussed above, one can reach a conclusion playing video games affect children adversely. It is because make children addictive about playing video games, and because playing video games have negative consequences on students health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...deo games have negative consequences on students health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 52.1666666667 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29834254144 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57598425483 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635359116022 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 618.680645161 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7488351079 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9166666667 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0724272882475 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292271000792 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657766708294 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469129166698 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469129166698 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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