young people enjoy life more than older people
There is no shortage of opinion on the discussion on whether young people enjoy life more than older people or even vice versa. Individuals have preferences and these choices are made mostly due to personal experiences. In my own opinion, i totally agree that young people enjoy more than older people do because of various reasons but i will explain the two main reasons i have in the paragraphs below.
First of all, i will discuss versatility and how young people have a wide range of options which are not limited because of commitments, vulnerabilities and even responsibilities. Young people tend to enjoy more than older people because they are young, they do not have much responsibilities, they can make choices and even fail at them, it does not really matter because a young person has the privilege to try again over and over again. Young people have options to explore a lot of things, travel around the world without having to think that they have children, or school fees to pay. In my opinion, young people have all the opportunity to make a wide range of limitless choices so they tend to enjoy more. My personal experience growing up with my parents is what I will use to further buttress my point on versatility and having a wide range of options to explore, see the world, attend parties, hang out with friends, watch movies, attend a cooking show and even just do a sleep over. older people don’t have all the time and opportunity to do this. Growing up, I always go out to play with my friends and as much as I remember, that freedom was priceless, it was like being able to do everything and anything without having any worry in the world. my parents were always going to work and coming back to talk, cook, watch the news and sleep. as for me, I go to school on weekdays and play with friends in school, joke around and n weekends, i go out to play with friends. Even till now, as a young adult, I have the choice to enjoy more than my parents because the older the young ones get, the older the old ones get. so the more enjoyment for the young ones.
Secondly, I agree that young people enjoy more than older people because of the advancement in technology which well, happens to be in our own age and century, as a young person, i believe that technology itself, social media capabilities to be specific is the apex of enjoyment. i could attend a party virtually, playing games on my mobile phone is enjoyment, chatting with friends is enjoyment, watching movies, playing music and keeping up with celebrity gist is enjoyment. I honestly cannot say the same for older people because I know not all of them can’t even handle a mobile phone. Personally, i had to help my mother and father do trivial things like update their phones and help them accept a friend request on Facebook. Most of the older people cannot even operate a twitter account and to me, twitter itself is enjoyment because you keep up with all the drama happening in the world from educational, social, political etc. In as much as some of the older people are up to date with technology, the older person cannot in any way be as fun as the younger ones or enjoy more than the young ones. Enjoyment is what most of us young people are all about. Sometimes, personally, i just want to have the feeling that every activity is fun or derive pleasure and enjoyment from everything no matter how little it is. The older ones tend to be more serious and do not enjoy as much as young ones and sometimes, the fact is that they are limited by some whole other things like thinking about how to put their kid to school, pay a rent, or even pay a utility bill. They do not have the kind of time that we young people have.
Time is also a major reason why i agree with the point that young people enjoy more than older people because older people always say they do ont have time. for example, if you invite my mum for a wedding, or a birthday celebration, nine times out of ten, she will give an excuse about how she has another important engagement. young people are move available to enjoy than older people. we have all the time in the world funnily. Consequently, young people definitely enjoy more than older people moreover, it is even more evident when we compare ourselves to our parents, it is hardly an occurrence when a parent enjoys more than the child, it is always we the young ones who enjoy more than our parents
The reasons explained above are why i agree that young people totally enjoy more than older people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, honestly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, as for, for example, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 15.1003584229 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 52.1666666667 192% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3702.0 1977.66487455 187% => OK
No of words: 822.0 407.700716846 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50364963504 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.35448805897 4.48103885553 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42338575698 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 325.0 212.727598566 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.395377128954 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1190.7 618.680645161 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 25.0 9.59856630824 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7545744477 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.655172414 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3448275862 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13793103448 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565210752256 0.236089414692 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203288008638 0.076458572812 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.195287979919 0.0737576698707 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.481176557541 0.150856017488 319% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11304956068 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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